| Digital Art / Photomanipulation / Dark | ©2013 =Celairen |
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Zurück in Vaters schoß
Dessen Zorn so zu entkommen
Heuchlerisch ahnungslos
Folgt mir zu den Sternen
Lasst den Turm auferstehen
Wenngleich die mauern brennen
Babylon darf nicht untergehen
Ihre schwingen schlagen schatten
Färben tag in Nacht
Während Unheil händereibend
Liebäugelnd zeitens wacht
In Strict Confidence

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I like the color choices for the underwater chill. I like the floating pieces around the torso but I get the feeling that this would have much more violence if it was a bubble of stone opening up. Also on that note, the water should have some form debris floating in the scene. It does not matter what kind of water but there is always something floating since it is moving and eroding the surroundings. It would also add to the depth of the piece.
I like the effort and the idea. I think it just needs a bit more detail to make it pop.
Just my 2 cents.
JE
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